Robots Ate Your Grandma

A collection of tales not concerning any robots eating anybodys grandmas.

My Photo
Name:
Location: Philippines

want to add your story here? Or tips on how to best "deal" with customs? Email me @ jackryan19ph@yahoo.com to get your story posted.

Thursday, December 14, 2006

fade into

Sitting at the condo alone is making me feel all gloomy, so I wrote this one. The feeling of helplessness with HanJiHye isn't helping either, so really. Gloomy days ahead for everybody. I like this one. Though it took me two days to write the last two lines. Somehow I just got stumped on how to finish it. I still think the last two lines could be better.

If they seem out of place, its because they are. They were written in a different time span than that of the rest of the poem.

fade into

into dull gray tones
the diluted and deaf

colors of my bones
fade like a child left

watching the billion's temple
dress in dead hues

and rainbows crumble
underneath a black muse

let grays live off sanity
let colors fade into obscurity

12/11/2006
rgalang

0 Comments:

Post a Comment

<< Home