fade into
Sitting at the condo alone is making me feel all gloomy, so I wrote this one. The feeling of helplessness with HanJiHye isn't helping either, so really. Gloomy days ahead for everybody. I like this one. Though it took me two days to write the last two lines. Somehow I just got stumped on how to finish it. I still think the last two lines could be better.
If they seem out of place, its because they are. They were written in a different time span than that of the rest of the poem.
If they seem out of place, its because they are. They were written in a different time span than that of the rest of the poem.
fade into
into dull gray tones
the diluted and deaf
colors of my bones
fade like a child left
watching the billion's temple
dress in dead hues
and rainbows crumble
underneath a black muse
let grays live off sanity
let colors fade into obscurity
12/11/2006
rgalang
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